It is raining outside,
My hair won't settle
I need a vacation;
I'm sick of doing words,
I want a cuddle
A hug or two more
I want a reunion
I want to meet someone for the first time
I want to see the moon
I want to run free
The sea beckoning to me
I want Christian Bale
I want someone to croon for me
I need that last bit of cheesecake
I want mom to bake
My eyes demand rest
My mind wants more
Sleep is a tentative word
Kisses are sweet albeit rare
I have to go shopping
I have to live up to my own expectations
The last 3 inches refuse to budge
Italian things are what dreams are made of
Both the cars and the men!
I want to meet Boozo
Maybe spend time with nature
I want to rewrite the lyrics of Black
I want to blow bubbles
And clear the window pane
The last bits of moisture
Fizzy hazes of pain
I want to break down
And yet fly so high
I want cookies too
Maybe some samosas with it
Soul curry for the mind
And get wasted away all night long
I want a voice which will make people weep
And eyes that will captivate your soul
Holding on forever
It is still pouring outside..
I know that wishing won't get me anywhere
But it won't stop me from dreaming!
You there, I love you.
You are reading this because you care! :)
My hair won't settle
I need a vacation;
I'm sick of doing words,
I want a cuddle
A hug or two more
I want a reunion
I want to meet someone for the first time
I want to see the moon
I want to run free
The sea beckoning to me
I want Christian Bale
I want someone to croon for me
I need that last bit of cheesecake
I want mom to bake
My eyes demand rest
My mind wants more
Sleep is a tentative word
Kisses are sweet albeit rare
I have to go shopping
I have to live up to my own expectations
The last 3 inches refuse to budge
Italian things are what dreams are made of
Both the cars and the men!
I want to meet Boozo
Maybe spend time with nature
I want to rewrite the lyrics of Black
I want to blow bubbles
And clear the window pane
The last bits of moisture
Fizzy hazes of pain
I want to break down
And yet fly so high
I want cookies too
Maybe some samosas with it
Soul curry for the mind
And get wasted away all night long
I want a voice which will make people weep
And eyes that will captivate your soul
Holding on forever
It is still pouring outside..
I know that wishing won't get me anywhere
But it won't stop me from dreaming!
You there, I love you.
You are reading this because you care! :)
49 comments:
wow!what a beautiful poem!I wish all ur needs are fulfilled soon.
**I want a cuddle
A hug or two more
hugzzzzz
hugzzzzz :D
**I want Christian Bale
when u r at it can u get me alicia silverstone :D
**And get wasted away all night long
ohhh me toooo!!!!
i loved d thoughts thr...n i mean LOVED them completely!!!
@ Mirage
It isn't a poem, really! :P
@ Mayz
:)
If you get me Christian Bale, I will get you Silverstone!
DEAL!
i want Megan Denise Fox ..
i want a break
i want to run away
i want to hide
i want a hug
ahh...all these wishes.if only they were fulfilled
you thr...i care...so love me tons ;)
you thr...i care...so love me tons ;)
Someone is hunting for lurrvvee!!! :P
Nicely written but ...
Why is it that you always "WANT TO" ??? :P
ahh
luv is evrywhere i feel
luvd it!!
:)
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and i kinda dont know the emoticon for cuddles ..
:)
i care :)
>:D<
lovely post!!
lol :) all of keep wishing....:) and what is life without it? :P keep wishing and someone will hear you :D
hugz :)
"tathastu"
Superb poem...full of emotions...hope ur wishes get fulfilled...good luck
I want all of the above too, except the samosaas n you can keep Bale....
Amen girl
hope all tht u wish comes true n soon :)
Me for now can do with a dog and the boy i love....i will be more thn happy if i get just these TWO...lol
ANd yeah....glad to cya back girl...
Good to see u back.. up n running!
And neatly written set of demands.. some sweet n simple and some preposterous.. but all in all a good read.
And yes.. I guess u r missing out on some love.. and that is the panacea for all ur nigglings !
"I want cookies too
Maybe some samosas with it
soul curry for the mind"
cookies n samosa--> that's a weird combination..
like green chutney and chocolate sauce.. heeeeee
weird or not, it's kickarseeeeeeee anytways! the taste budsa are happy :)
christian bale :) hmmmph.. i wan heath ledger man.. i'm obsessed with te guy; wish he came n resided in my body awhile :)
loved the jigsaw thoughts in the lines, they take you up, down and around..
they're random, yet unietd.. ya're a cherub!
Here's a hugeeee huggg and many wishes for you, just so that, you meet 'that someone' for the 'first time' at teh ryte tme :)
mwuahhhhh n hugssss :*
endless lists of needs and wants keep me from sinking into lifeless stagnancy.
Is it inappropriate to have the song "I kissed a girl" buzzin in my head when I read this?
I love lists like these. ^_^
big hug!!
loved this one...
such spontaneous lines...
wow!!!
:)
you really brought a big smile on the devilz face...
:-)
so well written.
Desires...ah, small big things that we want, the list never ends.
Love u too gal.
Hugs!
Bahut badiya....dont worry....u will get Christian Bale one day for sure....hehe
And yes, dreaming is importani, otherwise how will I even get to know what we are supposed to do in life....with life????
:)
>:D<
amen!
lurrfffvveedd it!
peace! :)
This was quite different!
Different from your usual takes. It pictured someone craving!
Mayst a tear fear a win,
As others sell dreams without a din!
@ Anurag
Okay, tell me what you want? Something different? Less materialistic? My blog. My wants. Do the math! :P
@ joiedevivre
Thank you!
@ Joel
My hug machine!!
>:D<
Mwah!
@ Gunj
>:D<
@ Vishesh
*fervently hopes that someone will*
:D
@ Trinaa
Gracias! :)
@ Rajesh
Trust me, this isn't a poem! :D
But I agree with the wishes getting fulfilled! ;)
@ Cindy
I wish I could have Bale to keep Bale!
*sigh*
@ Div
I wish more, hoping someone will hear some of them and maybe grant me Bale! ;)
It is good to be back!! ;)
@ Vrij
Preposterous?? Really???
Missing love.. Naah! Missing quality time for myself! :(
@ Jane
Hmmm... The time is right and my friend is always busy!! *curses offices worldwide*
:D :D :D
And samosas and cookies, definitely. Hand in hand! Nahhhh!! :D :D :D
@ Monk
:)
@ Mihir
Liar! You told me you didn't like my whiny posts! :D :D :D
@ Nidhi
Thank you. one right back at ya! ;)
>:D<
@ Humble Devil
If you are smiling, then half my work here is done!! Woohoooo!! :D
@ Express
Gracias. These lists always come to my mind when I'm stuck at home for more than one day! ;)
Either I drive everyone around me mad, else I just rant! :D
*hugs*
@ Gagan
Dreaming is important! But more important is to not make a habit out of it! ;)
@ Alok
:) :) :) :) :)
=P
@ Swati
:D
Thank you! :)
@ Prabhu
This list at the end of the day just proves that I am human. Prone to succumb to materialistic wants and prone to have attacks of random madness! :D :D :D
soo good...i want to comment more but i am not geting words out to do ..it loved the post...reading it made me think wat i want...:)...
urs..hemu..
Aww damn chweet..i can relate to so many wishes there ;) When ur quota's full..pass it on :D
ummmm....lovely, so true :) Made me smile coyly di!! :D
Rains, dreams and words... Wow!
i want that everything you want will come to life :)
We cant not dream, thats what makes us human :)
Lovely.
No harm in dreaming!
(: | :)
That's a mirror.
kothayyyy!!:)
Scribblers Inc.
nice thoughts!! cookies and samosas .what a combination!!
you want christian bale..and i want Cameron diaz :)
and nice to see nothing will stop you from dreaming :)
gr8 poem..
hope u get em all......
lovely words...you have crafted it so beautifully...excellent lines!
nice words...b'fully penned...
wow..beautiful expressions..even i wish all that on the list especially.."And get wasted away all night long"
beautiful...not-a-poem..
u rock!!
blogrollin u..visit my blog too..
lv:nickku
i think it is very long back that i read something of this sort....and also after a long time that i am in search of words to express wat i feel about your dreams....ay all your feelings come true
i also feel to be free and share a smile with some one whom i never know and i hope it happens when it is raining and i have a favourite book in ma hand....
good work by u frnd...keep blogging
visit my blogs when you are free and there is another blog too
www.dilmainhainpyar.blogspot.com
@ Hemanth
:D Didn't know that this provoked such extraordinary heights of sppechless'ness! But on a more serious note, I understand! :)
@ Mez
Glad to know you could relate!
@ Meghna
:D Smiling coyly and all! :P
@ Kulpreet
:)
@ Lena
Thank you so much dear! You are the best!!
@ Solitaire
:) No harm at all! ;)
@ Alok
:P
@ Scribbler's
Long story! :D
@ Nefariousoutlook
Hehe! You can have her! ;)
You have my blessings!! :D
@ Prashant
Thanks. But it isn't a poem! Really. Peace.
@ Flying stars
Gracias.
@ Pooja
:)
@ Nikkita
Errr.. I wasn't talking about drinking! :D I don't! I was super tired and was hoping to get wasted sleeping!! Weird? I am! ;)
Will drop by soon! :)
@ my views
Well.. I know what you are talking about! :)
That was b-e-a-utiful... :) Loved it right thru!
Merci!
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