TOSS:
- Amazing friends
- Caring boyfriend
- Understanding parents
- Picture perfect life
- Oodles of smiles
- Plethora of happiness
- Perfect family
- Nirvana
- Friends turn the blind eye
- Boyfriend shows the other side
- Parents still understand
- Patience is tested
- Sister metes out the silent treatment
- Bruises and cuts
- Blood
- Utopia
Even in death, there is peace, there is a shrouded covering of non-feign-able calm and peace. The aura and the beauty combined with the charm of silence, life goes on. Life never stops. Just our life does. Does it even matter that we live for others? Does it even matter that we care? I spent an entire vacation trying to figure out how to work things right with you, the moment I turned; you weren't there. I missed you. Yes, we have had issues. Lets do this right. Lets sort this out. Maybe, I will walk on the beach with you. Maybe; hand in hand.
PS: My letter to happiness. Unadulterated joy. I miss you. A lot. I wish you were here.
PPS: I am fine. And this is fiction. At least some of it. The friends, the family and the boyfriend are all doing well!! :)
58 comments:
The PPS says at least some of this is fiction, so which is and which is not??
P.S: I'm really really happy to be one giving your first comment cos it is definitely not an easy task!
good that everyone's doing fyn...but we dont care about everybody..we care about anindita...so howz she???
>:P
First line...'like the bus...' only a mumbaikar can know the importance of that millisecond isnt it..?
Wow! I like your post.... I dont know to write well but because of people like you, you make us aware about the different things of life... and just few minutes back i had a happiest talk of my life which i should have done long back...but now i have realized it.... YOu can say the coin was tossed and the luck came my side..!!! :) :) :) :) :)
Hey hey! I m back on your blog...sorry to be not so regular :-/
and lurveeee the first para :)
i mean ju absolutely love it !
it is slow and sublime and makes me thirsty :)
all in the right way :)
way to go :)
take care!
i loved it...its really awesome...i loved the part wer parents understand u even though in the toss or flip..thats gr8 thing ..
and PPS.lol all r fine ha....lol..hoz weekend passed dude..and have a gr8 Week ahead..
urs..hemu..
that was sooo cute!!! loved it!!!
Nice one!
Anindita...i see such a grown up mature thinking in this post. Wow gal...kudos to ya!!
I totally second Mez. This is so much mature girl.
And you put the whole perspective in a lovely way.
I hope you dont go missing again girl.
:)
hugs
that was a good peice of work .....
the first few lines means a lot....... dew drop one was true and i liked it very much
nice post!!
hellow there...
i hope the tossing n flipping is over n u see the happy side now....
take care gal.....
Wonderfully put fiction watever amount of it.M sure happiness is jus around the corner....
@ Shrav
That is for me to know and for you o ponder and let me know!! :D
PS: I love you comments, but no sir~e; you don't give me that! :|
Glad to see that you are back!! :)
@ Humbl Devil
I am doing good too!! :)
@ Rushab
Ya, only a Mumbaikar!! :D
As far as the writing goes, I think being aware is more important than writing well. As long as you are aware and you know; I think you are doing a pretty fabulous job! :)
I am so glad that you got lucky! :)
@ Veens
Hey, I'm glad to have you back! And thank you for the complements! :)
@ Hemanth
My parents always understand! :) And I love them for that! I'm good and I'm looking forward to having a good week. Hope you have a fabulous one! Take care. :)
baaaaaaaah!!besh besh!!:D
Scribblers Inc.
I was comparing each line of toss and flip.
Toss seems so peaceful and postive and flip looks so shattered.
Reading through it first i really thought i described the point of breaking down... but then nice to see a lil bit of positive side to it...
About if others care if we live for them ? Well its our coin... only we can determine how it can be spent... if you want to spend it on others..then do it it its your conviction... just be careful... lest you let other people spend it for you... if u know what i mean....
nice post.. hope ur doing okay...fiction or not...
cheers
can i be there at your other blog.. or is it privatee privatee
how do u write such "real" fiction??
hmmm.. nicely put .. but dont u think u're being too philosophical lately ? i mean.. i am craving to read a post on your blog which talks about something that happened today , or something that is more real and less abstract !!
these are mere suggestions .. obviously .. its ur blog .. u're the KING !! take care ..
and hey , my name isnt on your blog roll !! :P
No Comments !! :P
Everything is being already said..so Just Keep blogging !!! :D
welcome back!
It's easy being happy! Keep on smiling. You look smashing wearing a smile. :D
well why do we even live? all that we care for is what we need to give up...
So well tossed dear !! hp its not de sholay coin !!
Hey nice post!
Yes, at the end of the day, even if we live for others , when we are gone, its just us. the beginning ws just too fatte!
humms..bolevard of broken dreams
:-)
nice one miss
take care
ike the last ray of the sun which you are determined to catch; before you wilt and die. Like the beauty of a dew drop; which won't survive the day. Like the melodious sound of a baby's laughter, before it grows up. Like that last sip of alcohol; which keeps your emotions in check. ...vivid, so aptly put
nice contrast between toss n flip but d parents bit remaining same was so nice:)
My 2nd visit, via Ambrosia, and 1st comment!!
I think PS and PPS says a lot always, its upto ppl wat they make out of it looking carefully at wats been written!!
**Even in death, there is peace,
i dont think so, there is no peace, do u know? how do u know?
U knw its simply like the presentation of 1 person can make the another one feel he is alright or nothing is alright, but wats going on, only the 1st knows!!
We dont know life after death... so i think peace or no peace, questionable!! :)
**I spent an entire vacation trying to figure out how to work things right with you
Ppl spend lifetime, dont they... Failures are temporary, but learnings from them are permanent!! :)
I liked the fiction in ur post... and if i read carefully, u created it!! :)
good one...
Cheers!!!
awww... it was painful until you told it all is fine..
i think it still matters that we care, even if the other side is not.. if we didnt we would have stopped to respect ourselves :)
WOW... Ani's back with a bang... Lurrrrrrvd this one totally
Nicely done girl, i was alrdy imrssd n now m more thn imprssd :)
MUAH... especially luvd this line
**The aura and the beauty combined with the charm of silence, life goes
Are we not always left to do the catching? I guess life is all about catching the illusions which blind the things! Once you catch things it need to be safe guarded from mood swings! Is it really so difficult to live a life because we evolve?
Heads:I search for happiness.
Tails: I need to define happiness!
Complete the journey! Do not jump out of the bus!
//Utopia
its a flip side?
That's so sweet of you dear!!
I'll be back here everyday hereafter...
: huggles anindita :
@ Mayz
Thank you!! :)
Glad you liked it!!
@ Solitaire
Gracias!! :D
@ Mez
Wow! That probably one of the best comments I have received!! :) Thankuuuuuu...
*HUGS*
@ Cindy
:D
I will try not to go missing! I promise.
:)
@ the solitary writer
Thank you! :)
@ Mia
The tossing and flipping never stop. We just have to make the best of what we get! :)
@ Chaggo
Danke!
@ Scribbler's
Dhonnobad! :D
@ Nidhi
Those are the two sides of life. It is a sine curve. I just used the coin as a metaphor...! :D
@ Samby
We decide to toss and flip out coin no matter who it is for. It is always our decision. :)
As for the other blog, my apologies, it is restricted to everyone. Sorry.
@ Gunj
Aahhh! Practice! :D
@ Ankur
Hmmm.. Abstract. Not too many people can do that well! And I am the QUEEN of my blog, not the KING!! :D :D :D
You'll be in my blogroll, don't worry! :)
@ Ashish Surana
Welcome to my blog. I hope to see you here more often! And even if everyone has said it, your comment would still be valuable! :) Hope to see you more often!!
@ Vaudevillian
Gracias! :)
@ mihir
:D :D :D :D :D
*are you blinded yet?*
@ Vishesh
True but such is life!!
@ Orchid
Thank you!! It isn't the sholay coin! :D
@ Express
Boulevard indeed! It is always us! :) No one else is ever involved. Our life!! :D
@ V
Thanks!! :)
so progress is goin..
its imp to kno either side!!
tc
@ comfortably numb
The parents will always remain the same. Always.
*Touchwood*
@ Ankur
Welcome here! :)
And amen! I am not going to contest the peace bit, it is our way of viewing and observing and defining things... :)
I hope to see you here more often! Take care.
@ Lena
The other side doesn't matter, all that matters is us, and our beliefs. That's how we should live, respect others and gain respect for ourselves. :)
@ Div
Thankooooooo!!!! =D
@ Prabhu
I didn't get what you were trying to convey. It was way too abstract..! :(
@ stupid
:D
Utopia is what you believe it to be! ;)
@ Shrav
That would be nice! :)
@ Mihir
*let go of me*
:D
@ Joidevivre
I hope I can figure out the other side!! :)
mmmmmmmmmmm...nice :)
Change that 'would be' to 'will'.. cos here I am!!
madam wer r u ...not seen these days come bac son :)..
urs..hemu..
Are your tosses and flips in order??..how does perfect family connect with blood :O :P
you forgot to add a certain hyperactive maniac in the list :P
oh well.
nicely written :)
XOXOXOXOXO
well nice to know all well with you. but right now, trust me you wont believe it, this is EXACTLY EXACTLY the way im feeling now.. it soo perfectly puts everything.. sigh
i miss u too, joy!
interesting post!!! and yeah unadultrated joy ..something everyone misses i guess :)
Am here after quite sometime.Was on a break (much like the vaccation you talked about in your post-the only difference being,it was not the first of its type.I do this often).So,apologies to dear Miss banter.
I believe there is a lot that author has kept to herself here-she should infact as this is not an NCERT text book that aims to educate people.Still beautiful it is as everyone who reads this can think on his own lines and get somewhere cosy.Anonymity often gives ideas a chance to be far more applicable and your post straightens the point out.Well done.
I'm awaiting you at my blog!!
liked the flip n the toss :)
gee, it was like batman n joker..
:)
i dun think anything on earth really matters.. cos , life moves on, no matter what, cos that's how the circle of life n death goes..
sooo, as long as we're there, we might as well enjoy life to the fullest, n keep that full smile turned ON :)
it's been a longgg tyme since i've been here :)
loveeeeeee n hugs to ya deet:)
thought that would be a cool way of shortiening ya name ;)
loveeeeeeeee
yars lassibean
loved d post al 2gdr...
d 1st para was awesome..
:)
madmae
where u
come take ur award
Missin Ya
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@ Trinaa
Gracias! :)
@Shrav
Nice!! :)
@ Hemanth
Life beckons. It is difficult to multitask! :D
@ Anurag
Everything is in order and the perfect family doesn't connect with blood! Life does!
@ Isha
I didn't forget. I know for a fact that you will always be there. Mwahhhh!!
@ Harini
Arre, don't worry. Life has its ups and downs. All will be good. Trust me and give it some time. Take care.
@ Lemonade
Welcome to my world! :)
@ Nefarious outlook
Yeah well, we all have our days!! :|
@ Mishra
I didn't keep much to myself and welcome back from your extended vacation. My post was aimed at getting people to think and that is what it exactly did! :) Hope to see you around more often! :)
@ Shrav
:D I did the honours! ;)
@ Jane
Hmmm. Deet. Sounds silly but I like!! :D
It has been ages I have seen you here or have visited other blogs! :D Will do that more often, take care girlie. Miss ya. Mwahhh.
@ Pooja
Gracias. :)
@ Div
Be right there! :) Mwahhh!
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