26 Nov 2008

The Temptress




You want a piece of me
Maybe you want the whole being
You want to be thrilled
You want the feel
You want the insanely heady rush
The smoothness
The grating smoothness
The unimaginable softness
You want the immediate high
You want the throes of elation
The endless boundaries of desire
The polished beauty
The finespun features
The prevailing finesse
You want the ceaseless pain
The tortured anguish
The endless hope
The perpetual faith
The consummate soul
You want the enamoring spirit
You want it all...

You can't have me
You can't tame the spirit
You can't apprehend the soul
You can't crush the faith
You can't torment the hope
You can't beguile me
The infliction will deepen
The pain will revere
The broken soul will heal
The spirit will soar
The body will break
The soul will remain pure
The purposeful eyes
The driven mind
All will hold strong
In these trying times

I can understand the thrill
All the heady ways
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze
She makes you swoon
She sends you in a daze
You would croon for her
You live in her craze
All you want is her
All you need is her
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze...

45 comments:

Lucifer said...

i loved this...for d sheer thought process gone into it...d choice of words n d flow was brillaint...
n temptation being one of my fav topics so it was pretty obv i wud love it

ps: smthn for ya on my 100th post

Scribblers Inc said...

This almost sounded like a scream-out-loud rock song! some real powerful expressions while holding the word usage and scant rhyme scheme in place!:)

Scribblers Inc.

Anonymous said...

wowie...awesome...!! just splendid!! emotions with a remote sense of rhyming and real hard work in it too...!!

will return here again and again!! its such a nice place to come to!! :)

Shravan Vijayaprasad said...

Wow! I'm in a loss for words! Was soo good!

Don't keep this up(lol) cos then I wouldn't have anythin to comment about only!:)

The Solitary Writer said...

hey its good ....the meaning is clear and u have expressed it beautifully.....nice work ...good to read this.....
btw h r u ? and hows studies goin on sem 7 from 4th naaa

good luck for exams

bye tc

will come back soon to read remaining posts
bye tc

Vishesh said...

apt.

Trinaa said...

ur temptation personified in this poem honey!!! brilliantly put...now write more poems!!!!!!!!

Anindita said...

@ Mayz

Awww... Thank you!! My first comment and all!! =D

PS: Thanks a ton for mentioning me in your 100th post!!! I'm really touched! :)

@ Scribbler's

Whoa! Scream-out-loud rock song! Well for a change I'm running short of words!!! :D

Thanks!! :)

@ Leo

Thank you. Hope to keep seeing you here!! :) :) :)

Anurag said...

Ahh !!! Lust in the Time of Exams ....
Damn !!! :D

Anindita said...

@ Shrav

Gracias! :P

Don't keep this up! Well, ofcourse not; I plan to get better!! :D :D :D

@ The Solitary Writer

Thank you!! I'm good, randomly studying and all that jazz. How are you doing? And what are you up to post Engg???

Cya soon. Take care. :)

@ Vishesh

Probably the most honest comment I have received in ages. Thanks! :)

@ Trinaa

Me and temptation...???

*Looks around innocently*
=D

More poetry.. Lets see.. :)

Anindita said...

@ Anurag

Temptation is the only thing you can't resist eh????? ;) ;) ;)

All the best for the exams!! :)
Kick serious ass!! :D

Hemanth Potluri said...

its soo cool :) and awesome...u did lot of research for this post i guess so ...the words were quite played very well in the post :)...keep smiling

urs..hemu..

Prabhu Dutta Das said...

I was immersed in the flow when two yous were trying to wriggle through the creaks. I was so gripped by your vice. Just keep writing.

P.S.Did I hear you saying planning to drop? Don't not kill it. It would almost be like a great abortion. Let it flow!

Trevor Penn said...

Marvelous.

Couldn't have been done any better.

Anindita said...

@ Hemanth

Thank you. I didn't do any research re, for a change I just wrote as it came to my head.. Awesome ideas strike Engineers at 5 in the morning!! :P

@ PDD

Firstly, it isn't me! See the picture I put up? She can be a temptress! Not me. Never me.

Hmmmm.. I'll think about what you said about banter, maybe she'll live, maybe... I don't know.. Not yet... :(

@ Trevor

Gracias!! :)

Vyzz said...

hey!

that was a lovely poem..really..so touching...i mean all temptation squeezed into this!

:)

cherrio!

Anindita said...

@ Vyo

Thankuuuuuuuuu!!! :)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

yupperz!!

sexy rok song lyrics...

actually sounds like a rebellious bryan adaMs song!
:D

n yeahhhh, any woman would lurvvv to be the temptress..
)
we love to play hard ball ;) (pun intended)

Cяystal said...

Fiery gaze..
OmFg!
I so wanna see the temptress now..anyway,jokes apart!
Well woven..it spelt temptation.

PS-I'm falling in love with your dp :P

Ankur Kakkar said...

whoa ..... 'sense ans sensibility' ... you could give jane austen a run for her money !!

Express said...

O-H M-Y G-O-D!
oh my dear dear god!

by far,
by far one of the best poems u've ever written.

and I already AM ur fan.

so? when d v start with my poetry learning sessions?

Shravan Vijayaprasad said...

yOu plan to get better :D?? well, is there something above this??

Mihir Pathare said...

I'm itching to sing this, but I can't! What's the tune?

Amit Charles said...

Impressive work. Liked the flow.
keep it rollin;)

Vaudevillian said...

How. The. Hell. Do. You. Write. Poems!
Post a tutorial or something man
Everyone okay around there?

Ankur Kakkar said...

hey... plz write something on the terror attacks in mumbai ... i am going to dedicate my next post to it ..

Mystique said...

hi....haven't seen you round in a while... it hink i'd lost your URL...

Scribblers Inc said...

HAPPY BELATED BUDDAY!

Errm...gues no one knows it here... :P

Scribblers Inc.

Lena said...

wow! that was indeed impressive! Greatly written, toally loved the flow of words :)

WarmSunshine said...

You know Anindita... this was a very powerful one... as someone looking straight in the eyes of the whole world, throwing a challenge right at it's face. I simply loved this, for it's bold and untamed tone, for the unbridled passion of the character of this poem.

Very good indeed!

Unknown said...

Anindita!

Didn't know there was this great poet sleeping inside you. :D YAY!

Oh btw. I moved to different space. A different name. Just in case you were wondering. Please do grace me with your presence. There isn't much up yet.


PEACE

Chronicler said...

awesum stuff there girl... way to go.. girl power at its best.. the enigma thats a woman...

Mysterious Mia said...

long time that u came up with something lilke this...loved every bit of it....nicely written

Anurag said...

An Award Awaits you in my blog...
Come Collect :P

Heart'n'Soul said...

this is not awesome, this is WOWSOME

was nice talkin to u dear... hope to catch up with u soon :D

Meghna said...

Hey anindita di.....tooo gooood......fabulous yaar!!!

BTW< u forgotten me :(

Do pay a visit :P

Born to balance the gud said...
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Born to balance the gud said...

Amazing
thats wht I call deep emphasis on shallowness

Anindita said...

@ Jane

Ahhh.. My favourite hard ball!! :D

Thanks! When was the last time you played the temptress...????!!! :D

@ Crystal

Hmmm!!! My DP... Oki! :D :D :D

Thanks! :)

@ Ankur

Whoa! Thanks! :)
But I'm not as good as her, yet!! ;)

@ Express

Thanks dear..

Poetry lessons...??!! When do you have some spare time??!! ;)

Anindita said...

@ Shrav

Wait and watch!! :D

@ Mihir

Form a group, think of a tune and send me a shout!! :D

@ Scribbler

Gracias.

@ Vaudevillian

Thanks! Stuff is oki here. And i know, my reply is way late! Sowwie.

Anindita said...

@ Ankur

It is good to know that you are dedicating a post on it. As far as me writing about it does, I can't. I can't capture the destruction in words.. And frankly speaking, there is nothing to tell... It just hurts...

@ Mystique

Hmmmm.. Guess you found it okay. :)

@ Scribbler's Inc.

Thank you! Doesn't look like anyone knows! :D

@ Lena

Merci.

Anindita said...

@ Warm sunshine

Thank you so much. :)

@ Writing for crows

Hmmm, there is a lot you don't know!! :P I'll check out the new kingdom. :)

@ Swayam

I couldn't have put it better myself.

@ Mia

Thank you!! :)

Anindita said...

@ Anurag

Thank you!! :)

@ Div

Hehe, thanks! Hope to see you soon!! :)

@ Meghna

Hey, I haven't forgotten you, I have just gotten busy. Will drop by soon!

@ Sneha

Thanks! :)

Hyperactive maniac said...

*blinded by sheer awesomeness*

Unknown said...

Wah Wah ! I especially Liked the first para .. too good ...