You want a piece of me
Maybe you want the whole being
You want to be thrilled
You want the feel
You want the insanely heady rush
The smoothness
The grating smoothness
The unimaginable softness
You want the immediate high
You want the throes of elation
The endless boundaries of desire
The polished beauty
The finespun features
The prevailing finesse
You want the ceaseless pain
The tortured anguish
The endless hope
The perpetual faith
The consummate soul
You want the enamoring spirit
You want it all...
You can't have me
You can't tame the spirit
You can't apprehend the soul
You can't crush the faith
You can't torment the hope
You can't beguile me
The infliction will deepen
The pain will revere
The broken soul will heal
The spirit will soar
The body will break
The soul will remain pure
The purposeful eyes
The driven mind
All will hold strong
In these trying times
I can understand the thrill
All the heady ways
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze
She makes you swoon
She sends you in a daze
You would croon for her
You live in her craze
All you want is her
All you need is her
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze...
Maybe you want the whole being
You want to be thrilled
You want the feel
You want the insanely heady rush
The smoothness
The grating smoothness
The unimaginable softness
You want the immediate high
You want the throes of elation
The endless boundaries of desire
The polished beauty
The finespun features
The prevailing finesse
You want the ceaseless pain
The tortured anguish
The endless hope
The perpetual faith
The consummate soul
You want the enamoring spirit
You want it all...
You can't have me
You can't tame the spirit
You can't apprehend the soul
You can't crush the faith
You can't torment the hope
You can't beguile me
The infliction will deepen
The pain will revere
The broken soul will heal
The spirit will soar
The body will break
The soul will remain pure
The purposeful eyes
The driven mind
All will hold strong
In these trying times
I can understand the thrill
All the heady ways
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze
She makes you swoon
She sends you in a daze
You would croon for her
You live in her craze
All you want is her
All you need is her
The barbed satin beauty
And her fiery gaze...
45 comments:
i loved this...for d sheer thought process gone into it...d choice of words n d flow was brillaint...
n temptation being one of my fav topics so it was pretty obv i wud love it
ps: smthn for ya on my 100th post
This almost sounded like a scream-out-loud rock song! some real powerful expressions while holding the word usage and scant rhyme scheme in place!:)
Scribblers Inc.
wowie...awesome...!! just splendid!! emotions with a remote sense of rhyming and real hard work in it too...!!
will return here again and again!! its such a nice place to come to!! :)
Wow! I'm in a loss for words! Was soo good!
Don't keep this up(lol) cos then I wouldn't have anythin to comment about only!:)
hey its good ....the meaning is clear and u have expressed it beautifully.....nice work ...good to read this.....
btw h r u ? and hows studies goin on sem 7 from 4th naaa
good luck for exams
bye tc
will come back soon to read remaining posts
bye tc
apt.
ur temptation personified in this poem honey!!! brilliantly put...now write more poems!!!!!!!!
@ Mayz
Awww... Thank you!! My first comment and all!! =D
PS: Thanks a ton for mentioning me in your 100th post!!! I'm really touched! :)
@ Scribbler's
Whoa! Scream-out-loud rock song! Well for a change I'm running short of words!!! :D
Thanks!! :)
@ Leo
Thank you. Hope to keep seeing you here!! :) :) :)
Ahh !!! Lust in the Time of Exams ....
Damn !!! :D
@ Shrav
Gracias! :P
Don't keep this up! Well, ofcourse not; I plan to get better!! :D :D :D
@ The Solitary Writer
Thank you!! I'm good, randomly studying and all that jazz. How are you doing? And what are you up to post Engg???
Cya soon. Take care. :)
@ Vishesh
Probably the most honest comment I have received in ages. Thanks! :)
@ Trinaa
Me and temptation...???
*Looks around innocently*
=D
More poetry.. Lets see.. :)
@ Anurag
Temptation is the only thing you can't resist eh????? ;) ;) ;)
All the best for the exams!! :)
Kick serious ass!! :D
its soo cool :) and awesome...u did lot of research for this post i guess so ...the words were quite played very well in the post :)...keep smiling
urs..hemu..
I was immersed in the flow when two yous were trying to wriggle through the creaks. I was so gripped by your vice. Just keep writing.
P.S.Did I hear you saying planning to drop? Don't not kill it. It would almost be like a great abortion. Let it flow!
Marvelous.
Couldn't have been done any better.
@ Hemanth
Thank you. I didn't do any research re, for a change I just wrote as it came to my head.. Awesome ideas strike Engineers at 5 in the morning!! :P
@ PDD
Firstly, it isn't me! See the picture I put up? She can be a temptress! Not me. Never me.
Hmmmm.. I'll think about what you said about banter, maybe she'll live, maybe... I don't know.. Not yet... :(
@ Trevor
Gracias!! :)
hey!
that was a lovely poem..really..so touching...i mean all temptation squeezed into this!
:)
cherrio!
@ Vyo
Thankuuuuuuuuu!!! :)
yupperz!!
sexy rok song lyrics...
actually sounds like a rebellious bryan adaMs song!
:D
n yeahhhh, any woman would lurvvv to be the temptress..
)
we love to play hard ball ;) (pun intended)
Fiery gaze..
OmFg!
I so wanna see the temptress now..anyway,jokes apart!
Well woven..it spelt temptation.
PS-I'm falling in love with your dp :P
whoa ..... 'sense ans sensibility' ... you could give jane austen a run for her money !!
O-H M-Y G-O-D!
oh my dear dear god!
by far,
by far one of the best poems u've ever written.
and I already AM ur fan.
so? when d v start with my poetry learning sessions?
yOu plan to get better :D?? well, is there something above this??
I'm itching to sing this, but I can't! What's the tune?
Impressive work. Liked the flow.
keep it rollin;)
How. The. Hell. Do. You. Write. Poems!
Post a tutorial or something man
Everyone okay around there?
hey... plz write something on the terror attacks in mumbai ... i am going to dedicate my next post to it ..
hi....haven't seen you round in a while... it hink i'd lost your URL...
HAPPY BELATED BUDDAY!
Errm...gues no one knows it here... :P
Scribblers Inc.
wow! that was indeed impressive! Greatly written, toally loved the flow of words :)
You know Anindita... this was a very powerful one... as someone looking straight in the eyes of the whole world, throwing a challenge right at it's face. I simply loved this, for it's bold and untamed tone, for the unbridled passion of the character of this poem.
Very good indeed!
Anindita!
Didn't know there was this great poet sleeping inside you. :D YAY!
Oh btw. I moved to different space. A different name. Just in case you were wondering. Please do grace me with your presence. There isn't much up yet.
PEACE
awesum stuff there girl... way to go.. girl power at its best.. the enigma thats a woman...
long time that u came up with something lilke this...loved every bit of it....nicely written
An Award Awaits you in my blog...
Come Collect :P
this is not awesome, this is WOWSOME
was nice talkin to u dear... hope to catch up with u soon :D
Hey anindita di.....tooo gooood......fabulous yaar!!!
BTW< u forgotten me :(
Do pay a visit :P
Amazing
thats wht I call deep emphasis on shallowness
@ Jane
Ahhh.. My favourite hard ball!! :D
Thanks! When was the last time you played the temptress...????!!! :D
@ Crystal
Hmmm!!! My DP... Oki! :D :D :D
Thanks! :)
@ Ankur
Whoa! Thanks! :)
But I'm not as good as her, yet!! ;)
@ Express
Thanks dear..
Poetry lessons...??!! When do you have some spare time??!! ;)
@ Shrav
Wait and watch!! :D
@ Mihir
Form a group, think of a tune and send me a shout!! :D
@ Scribbler
Gracias.
@ Vaudevillian
Thanks! Stuff is oki here. And i know, my reply is way late! Sowwie.
@ Ankur
It is good to know that you are dedicating a post on it. As far as me writing about it does, I can't. I can't capture the destruction in words.. And frankly speaking, there is nothing to tell... It just hurts...
@ Mystique
Hmmmm.. Guess you found it okay. :)
@ Scribbler's Inc.
Thank you! Doesn't look like anyone knows! :D
@ Lena
Merci.
@ Warm sunshine
Thank you so much. :)
@ Writing for crows
Hmmm, there is a lot you don't know!! :P I'll check out the new kingdom. :)
@ Swayam
I couldn't have put it better myself.
@ Mia
Thank you!! :)
@ Anurag
Thank you!! :)
@ Div
Hehe, thanks! Hope to see you soon!! :)
@ Meghna
Hey, I haven't forgotten you, I have just gotten busy. Will drop by soon!
@ Sneha
Thanks! :)
*blinded by sheer awesomeness*
Wah Wah ! I especially Liked the first para .. too good ...
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